Multisyllabic Rhyming in Eminem vs. Tupac

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I recently read someone say that Tupac’s first verse on Bomb First has more multies than anything Eminem’s ever done. That seemed silly to me right out the gate; here are examples of Eminem’s internal rhyme and polysyllabic rhyme:

  • I let the beat commence so I can beat the sense in your elite defense
    I got some meat to mince, a crew to stomp, and then two feet to rinse.

  • Nine millimeter heater stashed in two seaters with meatcleavers.

  • Now the parents are suing cause little Darren is screwing
    Karen and Susan … Now it’s all ruined.

  • He’s ready for war, I’m ready for war,
    I got machetes and swords for any ****** that said he was raw
    My uzi’s heavy as yours, yeah you met me before
    I just didn’t have as large an arsenal of weapons before
    Marshall will step in the door, I’ll lay your head on the floor.

So I recalled my high school skillz, and highlighted a full Eminem verse:

Picture me sitting in a jail cell rotting
Or barricaded in a motel with twelve shotguns
So when the cops come knocking each hand’s got one
Cocked, ready to dump slugs heavy as shotputs

One man army, guns can’t harm me
Young and ornery, worse than my Uncle Ronnie
Ever since I got my first gun pulled on me
I can’t stop airing out my dirty laundry

Middle fingers flipped at censorship
Your friends just flipped over the swift penmanship
Ever since I spit some shit on “Infinite
I been giving it, a hundred and ten percent

Cause when I vent, most of my energy’s spent on enemies
Eighty percent of what I invent is Hennessey
Twenty percent is from being hungry as sin
Ten is because I love being under your skin

Yeah shit can happen, so stick to rappin
Quit the yappin or I’ma lift the mac and
That can lead to another mishap happenin
Skip the crap get the can of whoop-ass crackin!

Proves the point, I think. And when we consider actually astonishing Eminem verses (e.g. from ‘Stay Wide Awake’), comparing Tupac’s multies is just embarrassing.

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  • Jogn

    Real good post, great to hear about your experience

  • generic

    You missed more then a few yourself even when trying to analyze it but I guess that just proves your point nobody above ground can mess with em as far as multis and complexityvof their schemes hell you’d be hard pressed to find matches in the underground scene